Blind Honesty

I’m not

I wont

I cant


These weights
You can’t see
Are too heavy
For me.


Thank you
For asking
How my day
Has been.


One thought on “Blind Honesty

  1. I find this one sad and disheartening that the writer carries a burden which they feel unable to share…

    Again, a superb line structure which makes me feel ‘dragged down’ to the bottom of the poem by a weight so heavy, I fear i may fall over with the words as they drop off the page! Fantastic! 🙂

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