This Evening

Watching the rain
As it covers the window
In tiny polka dot marks
Blocking out the world
Drop by slow


One thought on “This Evening

  1. I am fascinated by the line structure of this one which meanders and wriggles downwards until it plops heavily, almost off the page, like the very raindrops it represents…

    I never cease to be in awe of the writer’s shining and gifted talent to create such masterpieces of poetry, inspired from a world which passes by unobserved by others.

    Just amazing!

    Well done, long may you continue! 🙂

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